I don't like all the pitchbends. You should only pitchbend the last note of every four bars. Sorry, but that kind of ruined the track for me. 2.5/5. The rest was great, just take it easy on the damn pitchbends.
Honestly... it reminds me of the music from the Sims series.
Really? oh man I really love the sims music. although I don't enjoy the games as much, the music has always been fun :D
I usually give a long and thought out review on audio pieces. I would usually say something about how they could improve. But... this isn't like most other pieces. It's short, but it is good. Here is my review: Fuck YES.
Well I am glad to hear you like it :D
I can tell you have basic knowledge of the software you use, but here are some tips... Always match your notes to the beat/tempo. People don't like offbeat notes. Learn about chords. Don't play vocals that conflict with the other noises tone-wise. Don't play a bunch of random notes and don't repeat the riff/melody you choose. You have to have some variation, even if you want to start and end with the same melody. I am going to give you a 2.5/5 because I understand what you wanted it to sound like, but I think you have a long way to go. Keep working on it, man. ~Rz
Thanks for tip... I will try harder and try do something more listenable :)
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